yo im back and heres my debute song "redemption" enjoy. notice a whole new structure and multies in this one. i've done A LOT of improving


verse 1

have u ever felt so small so helpless that u couldnt even crawl?
like ur over the edge ready to fall and we all call for help cuz u know we all grieve 'n fall
so we're sniffin coke and dope through nostrils, being sent to hospitals
and do it every day for a chance to get away from the pain
life is just one big game a migrain a big stain on a parchment of lives in vain
so im snortin cocaine to make my life worth livin im givin away the aches
the fakes and for the sakes of every one plz break ya habit i've had it, so make me
cuz lately im on edge, savin people from blood edge, too close to the slippin on this mud ledge
that we call this an opportunity to make ourselves greater, im the fuckin death shell instigator
why america do we support the middle and upperclass but we could give a rats ass as too why these kids cant pass
in highschool i know im a fool for assumin ur not cruel so sue me why can you do to me
i got no cash u already strapped that from me in the past
but now my i've grown my latest obession for beatin fags and im guessin that ive got the town policing
me as im releasin aggression fuckin teach them a lesson against this states oppression
im pressin the march on till the break of dawn the con-artist of murkin fucka's clean till they gone
while tearing limbs of like king kong and torturing you endless like u debuting in being "saw"n
im waitin for these diseases to watch lives as they cease to exist im pissed and these releases of anger will tear you to peices
tearing down your home like u just lost your leases, as you back off, my rep increases
fuck rap im still back tryna revive it asap, im clappin any bitch who gets in my im pimp slappin
im stackin, blackin whities go nightie nightie cuz the boogie monsters back out to play
disses hotter than a fish fillet, yo at least i got a bitch, you gay

Chorus:

Please god, save me from this life i never wanted it back
get me out of here quick i need some slack
i just cant take this, i dont need this
constant fighting and death in my life cuz i bleed (with no) bliss
(X2)

verse 2

drip drop watch as the rain drops, the pain stops, water seeps in and the stain crops
into metaphoric images these pilgrimages, its all over my minds sober
u want fire? i leave u retired sweatin bullets as u start to perspire
its a dire fact that i'll stab u in the back in ire through fire
through glass, im kickin ass and slash through ur juggular vein
so fast, got no past and im gettin my memories from a drug users brain
im insane, favor psychological warfare over my constant abuser pain
well fuck that, im back you cant stop the fact i'll attack you fuckin nazis
im rappin till u stop me, cant pop me and u faggots always thinkin you luck 'n got me
but you didnt cuz im still here to settle this deal i need to level with the devil
askin me to vocally kill 1000 people a year but i can do that in a day with fear so battle
me and lets see where it takes you. if i had to pay to kill you that'd be chump change
im taken deadly accurate aim at you like i was in a shooting range, shoot ya in the rump, strange?
nah i ment to shoot there watch you rise and fall like nasdaq, i'll blast that with my tech, matta of fact
im past that, you cant handle the truth, the only thing i rhyme in the booth, unlike your love track
ya fake playa, im the instagata, pushin people back into fights every night in spite
that they down and ready to fall i remember it all like a genius, shit im like the dim light
they walk into when they dead, yes ya life i sped-up to finish ya got a prob wit that?
i spat on ya shoes, ya life, ya wife, ya rings, ya things and if u dont wanna get killed sit back

Chorus:

Please god, save me from this life i never wanted it back
get me out of here quick i need some slack
i just cant take this, i dont need this
constant fighting and death in my life cuz i bleed (with no) bliss
(X2)

Final Chorus:

Thank you god for finally taking it all away
got me out of here fast, knew it would fall anyway
i lasted for so long, but i knew it'd all go wrong
all of it had finally gotten to me just took me that long
give me redemption